Client Feedback

"Dr. Joyce Starr added her unique and special touch to every chapter. She was a Godsend throughout this journey" - Mike Turpen, former Attorney General of Oklahoma, Turpen Time: The Wit and Wisdom of Mike Turpen

"Terrific was a pleasure working with you." - Elizabeth MacDonald, Stocks Editor, Fox Business News, Skirting Heresy: The Life and Times of Margery Kempe

"Joyce, This book is only possible because of your superb coaching and guidance." - Barb Dehn, Hot Guide to a Cool, Sexy Menopause

"I really appreciate your efforts in maintaining my voice and intentions. You are incredible. Great edits and chapter titles. I found your draft an extremely fast read, and much improved over what I sent. I'm really impressed with what you accomplished." - Pastor George Williamson,

"Dr. Joyce Starr provides the Olympics in author assistance. She revised, restructured and transformed my manuscript into a beautiful children's book. She treated my book as a work of art, from the cover and interior photos to the placement of text." - Marcia Miller, sign language interpreter, Tales From a Tail Wagging Dog

"Dr. Starr did an excellent job in restructuring and editing the proposal and sample chapters. I am proud to be associated with this outstanding project." - Admiral William Owens, former Vice Chairman, US Joint Chiefs of Staff, America & China in the Same Boat

"A masterful job. Every sentence you edit is better, cleaner and more succinct. It's like reading a new book." - M. Sachs, former surgeon, Cured

"Dr. Joyce Starr did a superb job of weaving my text into a persuasive and succinct photography book that was accepted by a leading house. - Dr. Cathy Greenblat, photographer, Love, Loss & Laughter: Seeing Alzheimer’s Differently

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Book Coachng Projects

When Your Labor of Love is a Novel – The Writer Behind the Hero

“When I first presented my manuscript to Dr. Joyce Starr, it was a diamond in the rough. Over a six -month period Dr. Starr worked tirelessly to make Old Flames into the book I always believed it could be. Joyce went the extra mile for me when I could no longer see the forest through the trees. She literally put her heart and soul into helping me maintain and amplify the voice of my novel’s protagonist. she never lost sight of the need to maintain the artistic integrity of an original manuscript.” – Arthur Samuels

Transforming Life Experiences into a Saleable Memoir. The Power of Memories.

“Dr. Starr added her unique and special touch to every chapter. She helped me more than anyone else on this ongoing odyssey, adventure. With all of the help, advice and editing, she has been an absolute Godsend. Since I have never engaged in an adventure like this before I really had no idea what to expect.” – Mike Turpen, former Attorney General of Colorado. The process took nearly a year to complete, including over 150 emails to Mike and/or Tate! Few aspiring authors understand what it takes to prepare a manuscript for publication or how to achieve the best outcome with their publisher.

Selling a Photo Book to Publishers – Words Matter.

Cathy Greenblat’s uplifting Alzheimer’s photos were being exhibited throughout the US and Europe to great acclaim. She hoped to publish a companion book with a leading publisher. Photography books, however, are a hard sell, as they’re generally more expensive to produce and difficult to market.

Dog Talking: The Author is a Labrador Retriever with Life Lessons to Share

“Dr. Starr revised, restructured and transformed my manuscript into a beautiful children’s book. When all seemed right, she strove for an even higher level. She treated my book as a work of art, from the title, cover photo, choice of fonts to the presentation of interior pages. She urged me to take photographs and then spent countless hours preparing them for the book. Publication of Tales From a Tail Wagging Dog by Ethel Frances is a testimony to her energy and commitment.” – Marcia Miller

Client’s Saintly Book on Margery Kempe featured on Fox News: “Skirting Heresy” by Elizabeth MacDonald

“Quite a book. Quite a subject. Quite an author.” —Neil Cavuto, Fox News. Elizabeth MacDonald asked that I revise chapters for submission to potential publishers and help prepare an effective proposal. With the assistance of literary agent Karen Gantz, she obtained a contract with Franciscan Media. Her book was published to great acclaim and countless 5-star reviews.